Friday, November 28, 2008

phase 3 presentation feedback




Since the last presentation, I have not posted any process yet.
Maybe it is time to!

During the presentation I got suggested to work

on colour : make it more fresh, young
on brand name : origin fits better than express
Don't forget my audience, they are teenagers
my design seemed to target older audience
look at existing mails, pen-pal (Post secret)
personalize each package (use animals, patterns)
slanted stripes look like France flag or barbershop (change the color)

theses were all good comments! Thank you everyone!!

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